From our preliminary sequence I've learnt the significance of continuity editing, and how this can this can effective in allowing you to speed up your editing without moving on from the scene too quickly. this can help you avoid viewer fatigue without losing the storyline.
In Hines sight i feel we could of used more cut aways to give a better feel of the settings and surroundings. I also feel we could have had a better ending, the build up was good was but i felt the ending was sufficient or powerful enough.
I think there was something missing on the sound side, i think a non-digetic soundtrack could have been used as a tool to set the scene and would have taken away some of that awkward silence, i don't feel the background noise was natural enough.
I feel we could have been more organised in have more complete or more detailed storyboards and we may have got a wider range of shots done.
I was proud of how clearly we portrayed the storyline, i feel there was no room for misunderstanding or complicating the viewer as it was executed in a way that is very clear.
Although, t do think its possible we could have chosen a better location to film on, one that allowed for the storyline to be slightly more extended or a certain part emphasised.
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